I don't recommend this for its story, but in case you would like to play a short parkour course that needs in-air control. It also features computers that run Manjaro.
The atmosphere is pretty decent, with the breathing sounds and walking sounds. The story idea is in the middle ground: not completely flawed, but very rushed. It's hard to make something interesting when it's this short. There's also no real point to taking the side paths, and in fact I was more inclined to go that way than be led down the garden path. I'm not saying it's a problem to have non-linearity, but it does feel unsatisfying to be able to go straight to the end.
The mechanics I mostly found frustrating. It's not too bad when you're inside the ship to get a modal dialogue pop up. A place in the UI to re-read them would have made sense, at least in a longer game or one with more of a puzzle. But what really annoyed me was getting a pop-up that stops me dead in my tracks when I'm half out of oxygen, to make me read a paragraph, and in a parkour section without an immediately obvious foward path and no valid backwards escape. In fact if you are too eager with the parkour, you might get stopped mid-air and fall as a result. I also really would have appreciated if the doors closed themselves on a short timer. You have to keep the oxygen in you see.. well.. if there were any.
Another thing that takes away from the experience is that it was clearly intended to be played in one sitting, and doesn't distinguish reloading a world from first entering the world. I'm not saying don't let the game begin again if it was finished, but if I had to go reconfigure something (like accidentally enabling creative mode), I probably shouldn't be made to start again. This is a common problem in Jam games.
I don't want to seem overly harsh or nit-picky. But my experience was mostly spent having a hard time with the parkour.
This is very helpful, you've successfully just about reinforced every point I could of thought of about my game that is bad, very thorough. And while I did test the parkour to make sure you would not fall mid jump because of the pop up, I do admit that putting my stoyline in a formspec was a really bad idea.
I don't recommend this for its story, but in case you would like to play a short parkour course that needs in-air control. It also features computers that run Manjaro.
The atmosphere is pretty decent, with the breathing sounds and walking sounds. The story idea is in the middle ground: not completely flawed, but very rushed. It's hard to make something interesting when it's this short. There's also no real point to taking the side paths, and in fact I was more inclined to go that way than be led down the garden path. I'm not saying it's a problem to have non-linearity, but it does feel unsatisfying to be able to go straight to the end.
The mechanics I mostly found frustrating. It's not too bad when you're inside the ship to get a modal dialogue pop up. A place in the UI to re-read them would have made sense, at least in a longer game or one with more of a puzzle. But what really annoyed me was getting a pop-up that stops me dead in my tracks when I'm half out of oxygen, to make me read a paragraph, and in a parkour section without an immediately obvious foward path and no valid backwards escape. In fact if you are too eager with the parkour, you might get stopped mid-air and fall as a result. I also really would have appreciated if the doors closed themselves on a short timer. You have to keep the oxygen in you see.. well.. if there were any.
Another thing that takes away from the experience is that it was clearly intended to be played in one sitting, and doesn't distinguish reloading a world from first entering the world. I'm not saying don't let the game begin again if it was finished, but if I had to go reconfigure something (like accidentally enabling creative mode), I probably shouldn't be made to start again. This is a common problem in Jam games.
I don't want to seem overly harsh or nit-picky. But my experience was mostly spent having a hard time with the parkour.
This is very helpful, you've successfully just about reinforced every point I could of thought of about my game that is bad, very thorough. And while I did test the parkour to make sure you would not fall mid jump because of the pop up, I do admit that putting my stoyline in a formspec was a really bad idea.